I have written a kpop song?

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  1. fantasygoose

    fantasygoose Trendsetter

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    I'm currently writing a story where the main character has amnesia.
    And in that story I made a character likes asian pop music, especially a girl group called G-Berries. And her favourite song by G-Berries is "Saranghae Goodbye."

    And then I suddenly wrote the chorus to the song:

    Baby Jebal please don’t cry cry cryyyyy
    I promise I will no more lie lie lieeee
    Mianhae, cause I was mean
    Now I’m gonna be more clean
    Saranghae goodbye

    And well... what do you think of the lyrics?
     
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    Please let us listen the music composition and refrain. To give a judge only by lyrics is to hard.
     
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    I actually recorded myself singing this now.
     
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    ok nice. But now you must compose this in musical notes. Have you instrument or music sampler?

    A setting with diffrent instruments is next step!

    Thanks that you gave us opportunity following your thoughts.
     
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    cheesy, but cute though! ;)
     

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